Tuesday, November 10, 2015

PB3A

For my WP3, I want to research a scholarly article about nutrition, nutritional facts, or nutritional facts labels. Using the first prompt idea, I would take this information and make it into two different pieces, one for a younger audience and one for an older audience. 
For the younger audience, I would make the back of a cereal box. The cereal box would be aimed at an audience approximately 7-12 years old, because 7 year olds can usually read on their own and 12 year olds are not yet teenagers and are still considered children. On the box would be a bunch of fun facts about health and nutrition, with a bunch of big fonts and bright colors. There would also be some illustrations, maybe of other kids so the audience can relate to the image, or of characters from popular tv shows or movies. On the side would be a nutritional facts label for the product. The language would be simple, and the sentences would be short. It would include a link to a website where the kid can get more information about nutrition and play fun games, and it would also remind the child to ask their parent’s permission before going online. It might also include a maze where the child can find the healthiest snack, or a crossword where the child can fill in nutritional words based on the simple clues. 
For the older audience, I’m still on the fence about what to do. This genre would definitely be aimed at parents, however. 
I could make a magazine or newspaper article about the low nutritional value of fast food and how harmful this food can be for children and parents alike. For this idea, I would use a formal but still somewhat conversational tone. The vocabulary would be high enough for an adult to understand, but wouldn't be over the average person’s head. The article would include rhetorical questions to make the intended audience of the piece think more critically about the topic. It would include some kind of visual, whether it be a graph/chart or a picture of an organic grocery store. It would contain many facts and not be a very opinionated piece. It would also be organized into multiple, medium length paragraphs.

I could also write a letter to a food company explaining my concern over the list of ingredients in a certain product. The structure of a normal business letter would be maintained— it would include a proper heading and greeting and would contain multiple paragraphs. It would include a handwritten signature at the end as well. In addition to addressing the problem, I would offer one or more possible solutions and suggest that the reader take them into consideration. The letter should be simple, relatively short, and to the point, like most complaint letters. Along with the complaint should come some compliments and thank you’s, so the reader is more obligated to do as asked. Along with being formal, the letter should be polite and friendly. It should also include contact information for the writer of the letter, so they can be contacted if necessary.

2 comments:

  1. Taypres,

    As long as you’re starting from the specific scholarly article and asking yourself, “OK, what parts of this piece can/should I pull out for my transformation… how can I bring this to life?” all of your ideas work. I have to say, though, I feel like the adult/older news/magazine article is a bit boring. Can you spice it up? Any outside-the-box ideas?

    I really like the formal letter complaint genre idea. That would definitely work, and I think that could bring some fresh “humanity” (or, if it’s cruel enough, a lack thereof!) to the piece. Before settling on anything, I recommend finding a scholarly article FIRST and THEN thinking about what kinds of genre transformations would work for that piece in particular.

    Z

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  2. Taaypresss, as i said in class, I think you have a great topic! I love the cereal box idea. One thing, why did you go in such great detail about the website you are going to attach a link to when all we are going to see is the link?! I think it would be cool if you included some of the features of the "website" on your cereal box, like a maze/word search/crossword puzzle. As for the older audience, I agree with Zack in that the article may be a little boring. Would you have fun doing it? With that being said, I am totally rooting for the complaint letter! I think you can make it really interesting and use strong diction to make you sound smart and get your point across affectively. You got this chica!
    Fun fact: I accidentally clicked "sign out" instead of publish when writing my first comment, so I had to rewrite it. go me

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