Thlog #6

This week in class I got a lot of good tips about my WP2 during the peer reading workshop. I forgot about adding quotes from the course readings, and one of my partners reminded me to add that in. She also told me to elaborate more, which made me realize that I had more evidence than analysis in my essay. WP2 was harder for me than WP1, but I ended up with a lot more information for this project than the first one. It was hard to decide what to write and what to leave out, but I think in the end I used just the right amount of information. I was unsure about my thesis, but using the concept of the arguability test helped me come up with one that made sense and fit with my argument.